Hi there! This is a very short interactive poem I made for the Twine Poetry Jam. It has music and sound, so I strongly recommend having the volume on.

This is the first poem/twine project I've ever released,  so I'd really value your feedback in the comments below!

Thanks for checking this out.

Made with Sugarcube and Tweego.

StatusReleased
PlatformsHTML5
Rating
Rated 4.5 out of 5 stars
(4 total ratings)
AuthorRynGM
GenreInteractive Fiction
Made withTwine
TagsHorror, poem, Psychological Horror, Short, Twine
Average sessionA few minutes

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https://youtu.be/YW57ErWT3bA

Actually this was my very first time...
Playing an interactive poem.

Personally I'm VERY into this kind of stuff.
I LOVE the atmosphere.
The poem is also pretty good.
I'm looking for more games like that in the future.

Excellent atmosphere (reminded me a little of The Monster Basement flash games) and sharp writing. 

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Thank you so much! Now I've got to check out The Monster Basement (especially while Flash still works in Chrome). :D

This is amazing! I really like the atmosphere.

Thank you! I'm really glad you enjoyed it. :D

This is wonderful and dark and unsettling.  More like this would be awesome, also would be on board with an expanded version with more options that branch the poem/narrative.

Phenomenal execution though! Good luck on future stuffs!

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Thank you so much for your feedback, it means a lot! Yeah, i'd have made it longer, but the jam has a word limit of 300 (which I skirted right up to).